i see potential but the execution is bruh

[warm parrot]

so like im praticing my skills i kinda like that but theres something wrong idk what exactly, id really appreciate any help (im days workin on this and i cant figure out whats wrong, maybe everything) IDK HELP

[warm parrot]

i changed it a lil bit

[cunning walrus]

VHP4 - First of all I thought the intro to this song was really good with emerging bass and a powerful drop. For feedback, I thought the the first hihat was very loud and harsh so try turning it down slightly or reduce some harsh frequencies. Also, the percs in the drop could turn down slightly and add some variation to it and also try adding some vocal effects like a breath or vocal one shot between parts to give tension and variety. Apart from this, I really enjoyed the drum fill at the end and the way the melody dropped and then came back in the higher frequencies.

[warm parrot]

tysm i will work on that

[warm parrot]

u got any vocal effect by any chance?

[cunning walrus]

Unfortunately, I can’t directly give you my samples due to my license stating this but I can tell you the pack name and company. The best (free) pack is euphoria - vocal sample pack by Cymatics that contains some. Many cymatics packs will have some part of vocal so check them out.