Which set of synths works better?

[storm bobcat]

Or ig both suck maybe

[true zodiac]

the first one is barely noticeable, while the second one adds some extra personality. Sound like boss music!

[sour locust]

First one def. The second one could be used as a chorus if you end up repeating the riff again

Reminds me of Killing Floor's soundtrack ngl

[storm bobcat]

you sure its barely noticable? .w.

[storm bobcat]

ohh okay nice idea

heres it without any synths

[sour locust]

Try fading the synth in from measure 6. Rn it's a bit too gradual

[storm bobcat]

oh like start with no synths

hmm

perhaps

[sour locust]

I also think the synth might need a little tweak. Maybe give it some reverb or something to give it a little texture other than just being pure saw/square

[storm bobcat]

oki!

[sour locust]

Honestly synth 3 is the only one that might need some texturing. The rest are fine to me.