First song please give me feedbacks

[leaden torrent]

Well this isn't exactly my favorite genre

Like at all

But it's okay I think?

There's one bit in particular though I dislike

I'll get the exact timing after I finish listening

I do like the use of silence at some parts though

That was nice

Starting at 20 seconds and continuing until 24 seconds

There's that bit where it uses an effect to repeat itself

But at one point it feels like it gets off tempo?

It's at 21 seconds

Specifically

But other than that I can't comment much more because again

Not my favorite genre of music

Hope that helps @solar ice

[solar ice]

Thank you very much🙌🏿🙌🏿

[languid igloo]

I think everything after the 30 second mark sounds super nice! particularly 22-25 sounds a bit awkward to me but other then that i dont have any complaints, the spamming part sounds good but the spam part thats more spread out sounds off beat to me fix that and i think its solid!

[leaden torrent]

Okay so I was NOT alone on that opinion