Pretty new to producing pls tips

[magic horizon]

I feel like theres something off but idk (pls tips)

[next egret]

at 0:13 when u go silent, i can hear the automation clip coming back into the mix

you can make it go from 0 to 100 instantly to better fit the effect you're going for

also consider adding a bass line

to fill the low frequencies

and maybe adding an EQ to the high freq melodies to take out the mid freq sounds to not clash with the mid melody

making the drums abit louder 2 but that might just be me

but all in all its a nice track

last thing that came to mind was risers

they can also accentuate your transitions

wait im stupid you had risers

lol ignore last thing

[magic horizon]

lol thanks tho for the feedbacks <3

[manic heron]

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