if the link doesn't work f it heres the mp3 file
#looking for feedback and anything constructive for me to get better...
near kestrel
no one listenin mannnnnnn
crude tide
if the link doesn't work f it heres the mp3 file
I dont know if I am hearing this correctly but I feel like the the bell / xylophon (idk exactly what instrument this is) is off key in the second note. Your closed hats sound kinda robotic, try playing around with the velocity of those a little. I really dont know if I am just an idiot but I really believe that the violin on the second part is heavily off key, it just sounds like its not made for the key you were using with the synth in the background. You could also try maybe making a new pattern and change the closed hats up a little, this would maybe make it a little more unique from the part before. Making it more dense would maybe make it sound better in the faster part. It would also make your beat more alive and entertaining. Otherwise I love the synth and the overall vibe of the beat
raven belfry
heres 3 other beats
Out of Everything im hearing
you've got stuff down
only thing you're missing is a good sense of music theory
your melodies are either kinda weak or off key
I get the minimalist beat you're trynna go for, but if not pulled off appropriately, your beats will just sound lifeless or empty
jaunty cloak