My DnB Song

[digital grail]

Hello everyone, here's a DnB* song that I've made, took me about 10ish hours in total to cook up.
I'm pretty proud of it, I consider it my best song that I've made yet.
*I'm a little unsure if this is DnB, If you know the correct genre, please lmk. :)
Let me know what you think about it :)

[dense hill]

this is like video game music dnb, kinda starts out like happy hardcore

i like it enough, like i said, sounds like it would be in a video game. bass is a little loud compared to percussion, but all in all its okay.

[digital grail]

Thanks for the feedback, anything in particular that I should Improve?

[random vapor]

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[dense hill]

turn bass/low mid down a little but balance it with the percussion, namely the hi hats and clap. if u wnat it to be more like dnb u probably gotta turn it up and look into how to make some more interesting drum and bass drum patterns

what i'd do to make it more like drum and bass it probably pitch it all down half a step or a full step, speed it up like 20 or 30 bpm and add more hi hats and snare accents

[digital grail]

Alright, will follow your advice, thanks!