Need feedback on this eerie piece

[vague junco]

So it’s going to be split into two songs, the buildup is one and it’s gonna transition into the beat drop, gotta work on some of the guitar but lmk if what yall think.

Also it’s supposed to give this eerie vibe to it

[stone knoll]

hihats bit too loud, sick drop tho

[vague junco]

Thank you

[real siren]

Gave +1 Rep to @stone knoll (current: #225 - 1)

[young prism]

this is awesome

[vague junco]

Thank you!