post punk

[grizzled jewel]

i feel like the lead is too evil

[grizzled jewel]

update

[grizzled jewel]

added some space

[analog bobcat]

it has good potential, finish this beat

[grizzled jewel]

You have anything you think would fit ?

[analog bobcat]

uh

i mean

not really

but listen to some post punk type beats and try getting some inspiration from those

if you want

[grizzled jewel]

updated it (chorus at 0:25)

[regal folio]

i like the song structure, the 2nd part is a nice touch and it makes for a decent song as a whole

Idk how u feel about this but it sounds like a weird demo of machine gun kelly.

[grizzled jewel]

Is this a compliment or should I cry 😭