#LF Honest Feedback Nu Metal (trying)

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inner belfry
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To me it sounds not that bad honestly
Did you make the backing track?

valid trail
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sounds good but you need to scream harder hahha

random vine
random vine
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and i cant seem to get in the right key for this song

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only part i really even like is the last whisperish part but even that is out of key

valid trail
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do you know the key of it even

random vine
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e minor

valid trail
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did you mix your voice

random vine
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i tried as hard as i could but it still sounds bad due to poor microphone and just overall my voice doesnt fit this type of stuff

valid trail
random vine
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yessir

valid trail
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its good

random vine
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i appreciate it it could be better but im not good at mixing or nothing so its all kinda a learning thing rn

valid trail
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why the rhyme scheme switch in 00:7 it cut me off

random vine
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it took a lot of retakes to kinda fit vocals into it as the whole song is 1:50 due to the instrumental so some vocal schemes change to fit it

valid trail
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i feel like if you screamed harder at the first song it wouldve been great

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and add distortion and shit

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whold sound like shoegaze

random vine
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wish i could but i was already loud asf and not tryna disturb anybody mainly it’d be me getting in the right key but i even tried pitch correcting with melodyne it still sounds odd

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always loved that type of style but never seem to get it right