Lmk how you feel abt this.
#synth beat
floral escarp
use another clap, use a loud one that slap the beat, the reast is really really good 9/10
stable vale
thanks ill add it in rn
quaint brook
it has potential i just think its really repetitive and the melody just hurts my ears, it overpowers everything way too much
stable vale
changed some things around still not done cuz im adding a second melody/lead but yea
quaint brook
this time you can hear the loop WAY too clearly
you need everything to run smooth together
the melody just comes to a full stop then comes back
wind flame
this time you can hear the loop WAY too clearly
agreed
stable vale
I thought the pause at the start was cool ðŸ˜
quaint brook
i see its only at the start of the song
if your gonna do something like that you need build up
you made only the melody stop and nothing else
but other than that the song does seem better
quaint brook
that part is really up to you depending on what you are doing
if your gonna stop the melody out of nowhere you should stop the other stuff too
it just comes with experience with that stuff
im not the best at explaining it
stable vale
I moved every pattern by 1 bar so idk what you mean by stopping the other stuff
severe spruce
I agree with 77777. It has potential... it sounds like the pop-out song on the new playboi carti album with that distorted rap vibe, kind of like what Ken Carson and others are doing.