Is this beat good for a beat battle? Help me with some feedback

[muted raptor]

What would you remove or add? Is the structure of the track good? It’s not mixed yet, so some elements might be louder than others—I'll adjust that in the mix. I just need some general feedback first, my ears are tired. (Sample is from de battle, not mine, I just changed it with FXs)

[fluid jackal]

tbh pop it into frequency splitter and see what frequencies are being denied, then add sounds that are around that frequency, the beginning is def missing something btw

[muted raptor]

thanks, bro. i will try new things.

[summer fern]

Gave +1 Rep to @hard charm (current: #123 - 1)

[fluid jackal]

great tool if your beat feels empty