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daring ravine Mar 15, 2025, 9:54 PM

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lol

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@neon kelp

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@tender terrace if you have time lol im not minding you

neon kelp Mar 15, 2025, 9:56 PM

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sounds majestic

median glade Mar 15, 2025, 9:56 PM

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beautiful asf

daring ravine Mar 15, 2025, 9:56 PM

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thx bro

median glade Mar 15, 2025, 9:57 PM

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a tear ran down my leg

neon kelp Mar 15, 2025, 9:57 PM

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theres the dude that always 🔥 reacts me

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bro is everywhere in the feedback section

daring ravine Mar 15, 2025, 9:57 PM

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thx for feedback appreaciate it

brisk ruin Mar 15, 2025, 10:12 PM

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beautiful work, man.

daring ravine Mar 15, 2025, 10:25 PM

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thx bro

valid hill Mar 15, 2025, 10:39 PM

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daring ravine lol

Insane vibes brother 🥵❤️‍🔥

tender terrace Mar 16, 2025, 12:34 AM

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I do like the vibe on this one actually. Good ear on the loop.

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 1:49 AM

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thx

river torrent Mar 16, 2025, 2:56 AM

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this shouldnt sound as good as it does 😩

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-# nutting rn

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 12:53 PM

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@river ether

river ether Mar 16, 2025, 1:00 PM

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Ok, so first things first:
It's very quiet, I had to turn up my volume to hear everything - Consider spending some time mastering and mixing the track and consider playing with some compression on the drums.

Secondly, the loop is nice, but the arrangement overall feels quite repetitive and lackluster - If Lo-Fi/Chill is the vibe you're going for, you might consider adding a few stabs/automations/effects/variations throughout the arrangement to keep the listener engaged.

Other than that, it's well produced;
The drums are good, nice sample selection and everything fits nicely together.
Keep it up!

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 1:05 PM

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tried to make it more melancholic but that aint no lofi lol

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yeah mix killed me

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tried all kind of way to make the melody more hearable

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but its an old sample

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so i think that was the maximum i could go

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cause when i trie to boost certain freq the resonance in the eq was crazy

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so i boosted only some Db and then just a Dynamic eq

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for more dynamics

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maybe the BAss is a bit too low cutted

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and the Kick is really softly

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with other sounds around you like Cars from outside or idk just random sounds the kick is really silent

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but thx appreaciate the feedback

hexed swallow Mar 16, 2025, 1:08 PM

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Amazing song

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 1:08 PM

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thx

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yeah it was Hard to come up with something its really just a 3 Bar loop the melody

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but i find it okay sound variations arent the biggest

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but its not that monotones

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 4:46 PM

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dusk mantle Mar 16, 2025, 5:04 PM

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fire

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 5:39 PM

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@azure sable made this by my own

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but not the Howard think

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the think above

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howard university was the sample i used or song

azure sable Mar 16, 2025, 5:46 PM

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daring ravine the think above

Apply some Grossbeat custom articulations. Not bad not bad. Funny enough, someone else posted a different version of the same sample, which I messed with and uplaoded here. Good sample practice

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 5:46 PM

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yeah they had the sample from me

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lol

azure sable Mar 16, 2025, 5:47 PM

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Oh

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 5:47 PM

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sended the youtube link into samples channel

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cause why not

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its cool song

azure sable Mar 16, 2025, 5:47 PM

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It is a cool song

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Lots that could be done with it in a dance music context alone

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Or a Metro-style hip hop song

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Even a Zaytoven could probably write some wicked piano over this

daring ravine Mar 16, 2025, 5:48 PM

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thats the cool think about sampling tones of variations

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you could get

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of 1 loop or song

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