feedback for this trap/hip-hop beat

[elder kettle]

i started producing abt 9 months ago, i try to go for a much louder approach in my beats but i want it to sound less muddy, i appreciate any feedback though whatsoever i am trying to get better

[wicked lichen]

U weren’t wrong about ur louder approach 😭 doesn’t sound THAT muddy to me, but I could be going deaf lol. I’d say turn the drums up a lil to balance it, melody feels a tad overwhelming

Ngl when I saw trap beat, that wasn’t the melody I was expecting to hear 😂 great job tho, gives me Ken Carson type beat vibes, if he found God

[elder kettle]

haha i appreciate it i definitely take a lot of inspiration from ken's producers especially with my drums, i was sort of going for like a newer d savage type of melody too

[wicked lichen]

Considering it’s a very saturated market in terms of type beats and stuff, can only respect u doing sumn different 🫡

[elder kettle]

thank you 🙏🙏