obtuse ether
meant to be a carti type beat
#my very first beat
worn rose
If this is actually your first beat, you've done extraordinarily well!
swift geode
this is actually pretty good like for the first steps!
hoary bloom
Two things, if that's your melody, keep it up cause it fits the carti vibe and you did a good job. If it's a sample, stop using samples as a beginner, unless you just want to focus on improving your drums in an exercise kinda context.
Which leads me to point number two.
The drums are still kinda all over the place. I would recomend you look up some basic trap patterns and focus on getting them right. You can expand from there and break the rules a little bit to archive your own sound and style.
I'm only being this "harsh", because this is the feedback section after all. Overall, if this is your first beat, there is a lot of potential. So to Improve, for now:
Look up some common trap and/or hip hop drum placements, figure out why they work, familiarize yourself with them, just by cooking a few 4 bar loops using samples, so that way, on your second proper beat, you can start to experiment and cook something that is already a lot more stable.
worn rose
Two things, if that's your melody, keep it up cause it fits the carti vibe and y...
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