Rate my song

[near lily]

hello im new to music making and FL studio and i really want to learn more about creating fast tempo music, i made this one a couple of months back in boscaceoil and then exported the midi into FL to "insert" the instruments.

I would love yer people advices about this song as i think it is not polished or it couldve been better , thankks!!!

[rich zenith]

first 15 secs + intro are well done

like the meat in your restraunt

lol

[rich zenith]

0: 50
arps are to loud. lower dem bout 2.9 - 3.2 db

[rich zenith]

1: 26
I wouldnt make my feedback to strict.

2:40 the two acenct leads are too loud

Sooooo I wouldnt make my feedback as strict and hard like for other produrcers. kinda give me selfe a soft push down.
For your first attemt it sound very clear, nice, has kinda kawaii theme in it.

[near lily]

HAHAHH kind of kawaii theme

for all these corrections, and for pointing out which ones are nice already, i appreciate it bro

[rich zenith]

kawaii bass

pixiel galaxy from snails house

[near lily]

YEP SNAILS HOUSE HAHAH

and alot of porter robinson

i love alot of those kinds of beats , and dnb

[rich zenith]

the other mixing stuff and technices are neccessary but they will be come at a latter point important.

now you just should know how to deal with mixer, eq and loundness, panning and some effcts like reverb, delay etc

[near lily]

thanks for the adviceee, i will focus on those points

[silver badger]

Very catchy and nice bro. 😎
I can actually envision this as an opening to an anime one day 🤘🏼

[rich zenith]

lol

gold idea

[near lily]

Thanks broo!! i appreciate it

[sharp junco]

Sounds nice bro good job

[near lily]

Hey, here i post a lil update as thanks for the advicess...
i lowered the db of the arps , and tried some reverb on them to make it a bit more distinct and not blend in with the rhythm instrument

[rich zenith]

kk

[amber wasp]

i cant help but feel like something is slightly off beat