first time using fl studio should i hang the jersey up

[tardy minnow]

I like the concept, the chord progression makes sense, but I would probably suggest using softer instruments, or at least making them sound less like straight up square/sawtooth waves. I've realized most of the challenge in making music is picking the right sounds, so you're halfway there. Never give up!

[quiet horizon]

maybe a little bit better?

i dont really know what im making