#rate my somg?

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analog ermineBOT
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Gave +1 Rep to @short marsh (current: #70 - 1)

ebon jacinth
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u are a shining light in a world of darkness

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gotta hop off fl now

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it was fun makin music

short marsh
short marsh
ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
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i gotta sleep n stuff

short marsh
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ohhh

ebon jacinth
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i will carry on tommorow in my free time

upper root
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imagine sleeping💀

short marsh
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you worded it like you were retiring

upper root
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nah frfrtho dfont overwork urself

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do some other things too

ebon jacinth
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cant use my pc or phone past 9 pm and im almost 18

short marsh
upper root
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ay bro

ebon jacinth
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its so peak

upper root
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im 17 and i cant either

ebon jacinth
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i HAVE to go now tho

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fr now

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bye everyone

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gn

upper root
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go

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before she whoops yo ass

polar herald
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The chords sound good but might be a little too complex to work with for a beginner

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The melody needs changing and the lead as well.

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this is for the first song btw

tidal narwhal
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1k messages

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congrats

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this is something

distant shore
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fr

rocky cipher
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you really made a lot of progress in this thread bro i fw that heavy

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i see a lot of people never listening to advice, especially on melodies following no key, but youve really improved and took that advice and used it to make better songs

analog ermineBOT
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@rocky cipher says:

great ❌ work bro

ebon jacinth
velvet hawk
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bro did not need his producer tag, nobody stealing ts

ebon jacinth
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even though im not

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i get a little bit of satisfaction out of producing

velvet hawk
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fair enough

river grove
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nah ts is strange

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try cleaning out ur ears first

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dont use cotton buds btw

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they are bad for ur ears

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use soap and water

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and after allat u can listen to this again and tell me what you think

ebon jacinth
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listening back to the mp3 it does sound like shet

compact quest
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how is there still activity in this chat

ebon jacinth
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yk how u said limit the kicks because they are too harsh

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i tried that and its softer now

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but the bassline takes up all of the low end and its messing the beat up

ebon jacinth
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tried fixing the eq

boreal hornet
undone canyon
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dawg Im ngl even my first beats didn't sound this bad just use your ears and be like huh these notes dont sound right

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this is just simple notes and some unmixed drums its not good by any means but keep it simple like this when learning what notes sound good I also dont know any music theory

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or even try a simple sample flip

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throw some basic drums on something already known that changes the vibe. this also wasnt made with love and within a few minutes.

upper root
ebon jacinth
upper root
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take the 7 and put it al the way down

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ngl with this type of bass a'd kick u should sidechain but i dont even know how to do that

ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
west needle
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This is not a song btw its a instrumental or a beat and its awfull 💩

boreal hornet
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god ur cringe

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the man is trying to improve himself and ur just spreading hate

pastel pecan
boreal hornet
cyan cosmos
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bro got a whole server dedicated to his song

ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
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bassline is muffled and it sounds soft

upper root
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honestly start over

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new project

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take a piano

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if u dont have any plugin yet take fl keys

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its stock

ebon jacinth
upper root
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and make a chords progression

upper root
ebon jacinth
upper root
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no one succeeds without failing

ebon jacinth
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ffs it sounds fine in fl studio but when its a .wav file then it sounds like shite

upper root
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cause u didnt mix it good

ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
upper root
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ass/10

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hard truth

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my shit is ass too

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i dont wanna sound like im a great producer cause im def not

ebon jacinth
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showed it to my friend and he said it was decent

ebon jacinth
upper root
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bro is being nice

ebon jacinth
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f this im starting over

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idgaf

upper root
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dont stick on 1 project

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make a new project everyday

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2 days max

ebon jacinth
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i WILL be using autogun

upper root
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whats that

ebon jacinth
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some synth with 4billion plugins

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i think fl crashed

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welp there goes my motivation

upper root
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js go on ur own tempo dont rush things

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this is kind of my stuff

ebon jacinth
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i like boom bap

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mobb deep, wutang etc

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but i cant make one to save my life

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like a boombap bea

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t

upper root
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cause they been producing for years

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they have thousands of hours of practise

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ifu expect to make beats like them just on ur first day then give up

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mac demarco got fasmous in 2008

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imagine how much he practised before he got famous

ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
upper root
ebon jacinth
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searched him up hes a singer

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i listen to rap

upper root
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listen to his music

ebon jacinth
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which is sad i know

upper root
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you def know him

ebon jacinth
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aight let me finish temperatures rising

ebon jacinth
upper root
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listen to freaking out the neighbourhood

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his only positive song

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kinda

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do you know mac miller?

ebon jacinth
ebon jacinth
upper root
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mac dmarco and mac miller where best buddies

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heart to heart from mac demarco is abb macmiller

ebon jacinth
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thats peak

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must have been heart breaking to lose ur best mate to drugs

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guessing mac was canadian too?

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both they names start with mac too

upper root
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he is

ebon jacinth
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ok im gonna listen to mac demarco now

ebon jacinth
upper root
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ofc u do

ebon jacinth
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ive come across it a couple times on tiktok (not calling it a tiktok song)

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its good

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makes a change from 21 savage

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heart to heart is good as well

upper root
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do you know tame impala?

ebon jacinth
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heard of em

reef trellis
ebon jacinth
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respectfully

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post ts (this shit) somewhere else

reef trellis
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Isn’t this for feedback?

cyan cosmos
ebon jacinth
sick ore
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I also still need to learn bro

upper root
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why does blud keepo posting

sick ore
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huh?

ebon jacinth
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im so honoured that people use my thread to push their beats

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might start charging people

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9th november 2024

boreal hornet
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im the next metro boomin

velvet cedar
cyan cosmos
coral pebble
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yo this entire thread is creasing me

analog ermineBOT
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@coral pebble says:

"brother what the ❌" is frying me so bad

ebon jacinth
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everything in that beat is ahh

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i used the default drums that appear in the channel rack when u first load up fl

upper root
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drums dont even matter

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wtf are those notes

shadow cloak
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Why is this thread still going man😭

ebon jacinth
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last yr when i made the beat

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i thought it was the best beat ever

upper root
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goofy

ebon jacinth
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fr

upper root
west needle
ebon jacinth
velvet cedar
upper root
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so ass and basic

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a girl voice doing ur producer tag

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be creatve

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fart in ur mic or sum

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ur own uniquefart that noone can recreate

ebon jacinth
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theres this rlly talented prod on tiktok

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called bacco

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and he has the most basic ass bland ass prod tag

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pisses me off sm

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just some girl saying "bacco" with a bit of delay

thorn prawn
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Hello, idk if u have said it but may I know your honest amount of experience?

spark sigil
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this post needs one more comment

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Dude how bad can this beat really be

velvet cedar
upper root
velvet cedar
tidal narwhal
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1.2k message

spark sigil
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Damn this beat really is doo doo

gusty jewel
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Lmao, the fact that people are shamelessly dumping tracks into this thread instead of making their own thread is just, 😭

ebon jacinth
thorn prawn
analog ermineBOT
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Gave +1 Rep to @ebon jacinth (current: #76 - 1)