first beat

[drowsy chasm]

yes the 808 is loud on purpose but i proly should turn it down

[lime finch]

not bad but the melody is drowned out of by the 808. also lots of clipping which this genre has but not this much. good structure for your first beat. put a soft clipper on the master if you havent already and turn down the bass a bit.

not a fan of the claps for highhats either, i'd just use a softishj highhat and try moving it around more

nj though, keep going

[drowsy chasm]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wQ1waV34Alw
i was going for something like this but i do think i messed up with the loudness

i have fruity limiter off

i just think the 808 is too harsh maybe

and kicks

[native garnet]

808 way too loud