First attempt to hiphop track, i dont know if it can actually be one, i just started

[brazen solstice]

that clap 😭

[marble oar]

The triple one?, you think it needs to go?

[sturdy wind]

As much as I'm not really a fan of hip hop, so I can't really give any good pointers on what hip hop artists generally do, but the arrangement sounds decent enough to work with. Try adding a melody over top of this as the rest seem to be mostly rhythm lines. Usually with a song with vocals, the vocals are the melody

[marble oar]

Thanks, yeah ive seen tutorials with ( i assume you mean counter melodies? ), but i cant get it to work for some reason

[sturdy wind]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZ5POrP-NMw Try this vid out :)

[marble oar]

on it

[sturdy wind]

The important thing to realize is that the melody is supposed to be a culmination of the rhythm, harmony (chord progression), and a bit of randomness thrown in to make it stand out

[brazen solstice]

bnuuy!!

[marble oar]

Would you advice to keept he three different piano's?, or split em

[sturdy wind]

I dunno. It sounds fine to me

[marble oar]

ty

[dire storm]

loading screen for new grounds type bea