Can't figure out the name for this yet but give me feedback (WIP)

[hollow oyster]

Make the kick stronger, add bass (will help ALOT), fix repetitiveness of the drums

otherwise its decent

[velvet tulip]

How would I make the kick stronger

Nvm

[hollow oyster]

i like using soundgoodiser or disruptor

[velvet tulip]

I figured it out

[hollow oyster]

or eq 2

fair enough

[velvet tulip]

Here's it with the kick stronger, I will add the bass later

[hollow oyster]

ye thats better

[velvet tulip]

Can't figure out what I should at at the end of this buildup

[fickle cloud]

me personally i dont like the structure of ur song and the melodies need better music theory i aint gon lie. ur instruments r also lowkey low quality so it's hard to judge

the ending was tuff tho im ngl

[velvet tulip]

I make music for fun/serious at the same time, I don't really care about every tiny detail of my songs

I don't know nothing about music theory

[fickle cloud]

ye nah ur music theory will just naturally get way better with experience so thats ight

u aint gotta spend allat time just learn how to make ur melodies on key n shit

it'll take like 10 minutes i promise