I like this a lot. The lyrics from 39 seconds to 57 seconds are quite good imo and I would argue for keeping that section, but yeah like you said the rest of them probably need to be reworked. As far as the music itself, I think you want more complex chords in that beginning part, it sounds like you are probably using individual notes? Turn them into full on chords if you haven't already. Good job and good luck!
#How does my mix sound
wheat cloak
wheat cloak
I don't sorry, so far I haven't touched vocals on fl studio at all. Try looking up some YouTube videos and I bet some of them will have good suggestions.
limber shell
I'm not an expert or anything, but as just a listener, this sounds fire.
limber shell
Ay no problem, can you rate my beat though?
summer copper
IS your room treated?
odd flame
summer copper
could use some mb compression
how much low end did you take out?
i cut my lows 170hz and just roll it out
so i keep the body, and then mb compression for the rest if its still too bassy
with multiband you're compressing just the frequencies you want...
you could use it to tighten up your mids and high mids while leaving your highs loose(air)
dunno what kind of sound you're going for but glad to help
molten reef
Yo the mix is decent. I like the groove on this, very 2000s.
What could be improved:
I think the kick is pumping a bit too hard right now. This may be fixed with the master but honestly I would turn down the kick a tiny bit to give everything else more room in the master.
I would EQ the voice a little more. It kind of sits in a weird spot in the mix. It has a lot of low-mid in it, and not enough mid-highs. You can saturate the vocals a bit, add a tiny bit of reverb to the vocals as well to give them some space.