feedback so far plz

[shut mortar]

plz and thank you kind sir or madam

not mixed yet

sorry its very quiet

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[spark crown]

I like it

What kinda beat is it

Would be better if it had some drums but only if it was a trap beat

[shut mortar]

thanks man. idk i just made whatever sounded good to me

[shut mortar]

you mean add more drums?

[spark crown]

I only produce mostly trap and drill beats so for me it would sound better with trap drums but that’s only if it was a trap beat though

[jovial lake]

to me this feels like you need to pick a lane and run with it
i'd either lean into the trap stuff and go with some of the suggestions already given or go more electronic/ambient with it

[shut mortar]

good point. im gonna move towards the latter

[shut mortar]

idk cant get the snare right. still sounds trappy. def need help with drums but i think the second half build is coming together nice. wanna add some chopped up vocals. definitely still wip, haven't mixed but a little

[ivory yoke]

the melody is fire 🔥 i like it