#i try to make a song without hihat

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civic iris
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plz feedback 🙏

civic iris
nova ether
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why is it not synced?

civic iris
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the sample ?

nova ether
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the beat?

raw plover
# civic iris

I love the variety of sound effects you've used. But there's a problem: there isn't a baseline. A bassline is necessary for a song to have melodic sense and groove; the bass note in your song is being played on the same key over and over so it gets a little bit repeating

nova ether
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i think the 808's arent consistent, or are playing up till the third bar and restarting which kinda makes it hard to bob my head

civic iris
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what can I do to change that?

nova ether
raw plover
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You should also play around with the drums, it is very hard to predict what is going to happen on the drums and 808 side of things

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Maybe try a different pattern that is on-beat

raw plover
civic iris
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Can I try to space them out better to let the 808s breathe?

nova ether
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here ima make a detroit rq so i can show

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cause idrk how to explain

civic iris
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its better like that ?

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i try to separate the 808's

nova ether
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its the same issue hold on

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is your sample going all four bars?

raw plover
# civic iris

There is still too many 808's playing, you should lower the amount, I tried making an example but I'm not really good at making beats

civic iris
nova ether
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tell me if this sucks i havent made this before

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and i just found out who "babytron" is

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but you see how the 808 goes all 4 bars?

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it sounds like yours is ending at 3/4 bars and restarting

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which ruins the rythm

civic iris
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it's my patterns of 808

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i think of the rythm is good now

raw plover
# civic iris

Because you're using a sample, 808s begin to clash when they go too near to one another