What do I do I've been stuck here for ages

[normal hollow]

Please give me feedback on what to add here and/or what to change (if something doesnt sound right), any harshness of feedback is ok!

[humble wigeon]

did you play the bass?

its really nice, really nice vibe, but its like a 10 min loop of an 8 bar section with two instruments , like is that your idea of almost finished song? because in terms of elements you could say you're nearly there but structure hasnt even started yet

[normal hollow]

yeah I know thats not finished yet, but I dont know what to really add.. also yea I played the bass myself!

[humble wigeon]

is it like on grid?

sick bass playing

i mean somewhat atleast

or is it weaving in and out of bpms

some really softly played 5 or 4 octave piano little motif every 8 bars or somthing thats what id start with but thats my style

and tendencies

[normal hollow]

I tried to make it on grid it took a while but I got it with a metronome

[normal hollow]

yeah i'll probably try that! thanks!

[humble wigeon]

so you're actually playing and at the end of the 8 bars so just before the new 8

oops wrong stat chat

*start

what bpm is it? 130 looks like ?

[normal hollow]

its 120bpm

[humble wigeon]

Did you add anything homie?

[normal hollow]

I added a quiet instrument in some places but I'm gonna work on it today

[humble wigeon]

can u send new one?

[humble wigeon]

we kinda made it animal crossing vibe it sounds like LMAO

[humble wigeon]

@normal hollow

[normal hollow]

wow thats actually really nice sounding

[normal hollow]

I will send in a bit I will work on it a bit before

[normal hollow]

Im pretty slow at doing stuff cause I havent produced for very long but theres a few small sounds and a very quiet ambience