I need feedback

[vivid mango]

i was making a song in musescore and i'm going to recreate in FL later but here is the musescore version please share with me your opinions 🗣️
NG link: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/1334509

[inland steppe]

uploada file please

[vivid mango]

mp3 if you don't want to support my ng account

[inland steppe]

brudder its called feedback., ur supposed to show unreleased stuff ur not supposed to upload full on songs uve already released

[vivid mango]

this is not a full song

has no end

and i wanted to make a 5min song lmao

this is just a half

and needs more instruments

[vivid mango]

in the newgrounds page says maybe in progress

[inland steppe]

oih ok mb ill listen then

this is very cool, ive never rllly seen stuff like this in a hoit minute, i like the instruments, especially the strings, but one thing that feels a bit off to me is the chords, on the 3rd chord. it feels like theres a couple notes in there that dont belong in the key and also the 4th chord too. but i think it works, it adds some disonance to it, and it lowkety feels like adventoruous ykonw, id also try and think about changing up the chords maybe like halfway through, to add vasreity to the song, just some ideas, very solid project

[vivid mango]

thanks man

I think the chord you're talking about is the B7.

and it sounds strange because it is inverted in a strange way, when I remake this I will improve it, thank you, could you recommend me some violin plugins?

i used the default violin sf2 in this lmao

[true robin]

Woah I love this

[vivid mango]

i love you to