Pop/Afrobeat song feedback

[rugged granite]

Hellooo I’ve been working on this track would love to hear some general thoughts 🔥

[rugged granite]

Anyone there

[rugged granite]

damn it's rlly that bad

[agile stirrup]

ill be here to save you.

its pretty good

real good

only thing i would change is the sound of the accent melody

that comes once and awhile

to a softer sound

[rugged granite]

you mean like the high arp that has the little reverse sound in it

I rlly like it 😭

Its like my fav part

maybe i'll bring down the octave?

[agile stirrup]

try it

but above my opinion man, the beat is so good everything is just preference at this point

[rugged granite]

thank you!

[rugged granite]

what you think of that?

[agile stirrup]

its good

i think the high arp version is better actually

the high arp adds contrast

just lower the volume of it