Need feedback

[main bolt]

part for Chorus

[subtle cave]

i dont think this riff works

doesnt feel like its going anywhere

[ivory mirage]

try going in a downwards motion with the riff towards the end

so it can resolve

the riff ends on a note that doesnt resolve

try ending the riff on the tonic note

and add more embellishments throughout the riff instead of repeating everything

lil 16th notes, some 8th notes