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what do you think it could improve on?

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i think you could swap the synth melody for something more organic sounding

cuz it sounds a lil robotic

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maybe

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wat

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but groove is there

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not really

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can be tried

Another?

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what?

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What else could improve?

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i feel likes

some of the sounds dont really go together that well

cuz u got the depressing piano and ghostly groan

then you got the bright sparkly sounding crash or whatever it is and the robotic sounding synth