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[tardy isle]

bruhhhhhhhhhhhh

[tardy isle]

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how can i place 808's without distortin the whole track

[limber leaf]

Whatchu mean?

[tardy isle]

i wanna finish this beat but 808's make everything sound distorted

i already shaped the 808

[limber leaf]

You are talking about that crackling?

[tardy isle]

i think that sounds kinda alright for the beat idk

i didnt remove any lows either

im not that experienced

i only used shape shaper

[limber leaf]

You could use a sine wave instead of a saw wave for the bass

[tardy isle]

this is aplugin?

[limber leaf]

Nah

Where did you get the bass?

[tardy isle]

uhm i have it downloaded

[limber leaf]

So its too distorted to you?

[tardy isle]

the bass that u already hear u mean?

[limber leaf]

Yeah that is a pretty distorted bass you could always pick a different one

[tardy isle]

its from the 'toxic biohazard' piano roll

[limber leaf]

It sounds like a reese bass

That sounds sick actually

[limber leaf]

You could turn down the unison

So its only 1 voice

[tardy isle]

How do i do this?

unison

[limber leaf]

Gotta do it in toxic biohazard

Because its creating that beating sound. That what you dont like right?

[tardy isle]

I like the sound

But could be alittle lower

Cuz i wanna add 808’s

And the sound vibrates harder then the 808

[limber leaf]

I see

[tardy isle]

Im kinda new also but im learning more daily

[limber leaf]

Its hard to have 2 basses playing at once

Especially if they have different patterns

[tardy isle]

Would a different kick be appropriate ?

[limber leaf]

It sound bad like 90% of the time

[tardy isle]

707 kick

[limber leaf]

I would stick to 1 bass

[tardy isle]

What can i adjust to make it more interesting

[limber leaf]

Maybe added some sorted of gated synth like 1/8 gating

I think there need to be some variation

[tardy isle]

can you show me?

I can allow u to use my pc

[limber leaf]

It basically plays the same thing over again

Well what synths do you have?

[tardy isle]

all stock

i dont have a real synth if thats what u mean

oh u mean the sound?

[limber leaf]

This what i mean by gated

You def need a melody tho

It would help alot

I mean i dont even mind the bass

Atleast a little melody that comes in occasionally

[tardy isle]

Ur fl looks crazy

[limber leaf]

Thanks

[tardy isle]

Where can i find good melodies

Eh

[limber leaf]

Gotta make them

Obviously

[tardy isle]

Flex

Ye haha lemme see

Can u hear this sound?

Idk if its goofy or not

Nah nvm

Wet fart sound hahaha

[tardy isle]

I think i made it worde

Worse

@limber leaf

[limber leaf]

Ill be back on in like 30

[limber leaf]

Yeah that sounds disturbing

[tardy isle]

Ye haha