best thing u ever heard and if not give me feedback

[swift lotus]

best thing u ever heard and if not give me feedback on how to improve

or just tell me what u dont like or think i should fix

[limber vale]

I like the ambient noise in the first section a lot, very cool. it feels a tad loud to me after the other elements drop, though, and the percussive elements (the rim shots or whatever they are) feel a bit short to me. maybe a small reverb or echo (or maybe just increasing the decay slightly) to add volume to them would be nice I think

pretty cool overall though

[gray spire]

ts is actually fire dammn

[swift lotus]

yo thanks i just realized how dry they is in the main section, thanks for pointing that out to me

[swift lotus]

yo thanks