#Need feedback on my grasp of Music Theory(?)

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cerulean lark
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This is a style of music I'm still trying to improve at. It's very inspired by motoi sakuraba's prog rock style. The problem is whenever I try my hand at this style, I feel hard pressed on not coming up with something that feels fantastic and original. I'm not entirely sure how I feel about this song, I think it has cool moments, but I think it's overall a mess. It feels forceful, and cluttered to me. However. I'm curious how other people resonate with that sentiment and with the song as it is now. I'm not looking for super scientific feedback necessarily, just some overall insight would be very much appreciated.

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ahem* Not that I'm formally educated in music theory btw

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Need feedback on my grasp of Music Theory(?)

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i think part of the problem is my insistance on that kind of. eh. constant bassline.

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"gotta make it sound like rock man"

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tranquil solstice
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Im not even lying this is so fricking good

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do you upload to youtube? Or spotify?

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You should finish it

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thats fricking sick keep it up

cerulean lark
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People really seem to like this one. I just didn't feel like it's my best work.

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I do upload to youtube yeah. I wanna get a soundcloud pro someday i think.

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there's a link in my profile

tranquil solstice
tranquil solstice
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so u might like something that the most of others dont