My first beat ever, please why does it sound like shit 🙏🙏🙏

[warm prism]

switch it up later on by adding clap/snares, some hit hat rolls and maybe a different instrument. maybe change your 808 as well. im listening on shitty speakers currently, so i cant really hear anything else that may need fixing but definitely gotta mix that better once you are done

[fleet jolt]

thanks ill try that

[molten helm]

You need different drum selection especially the hats

[hollow zenith]

Too much low end here, all the low sounds are somewhat mashing together

I would try to EQ out the low end of your synth, make sure your 808s have "Cut Itself" enabled