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clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 4:19 PM

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clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 4:41 PM

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how can I improve?

drifting forum Jan 30, 2024, 6:27 PM

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the melody just isnt it

clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 6:35 PM

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drifting forum the melody just isnt it

I like it

clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 6:36 PM

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drifting forum the melody just isnt it

any sorta constructive feedback

drifting forum Jan 30, 2024, 6:36 PM

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nop

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i just dont like it

clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 6:36 PM

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drifting forum i just dont like it

gotta have a reason for why it sounds bad

drifting forum Jan 30, 2024, 6:37 PM

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also it gets too loud at 16 seconds

clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 6:38 PM

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drifting forum also it gets too loud at 16 seconds

the melody or the whole track? it's all mixed under 0. I like the distorted 808

drifting forum Jan 30, 2024, 6:39 PM

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808s are great imo

clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 6:40 PM

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drifting forum 808s are great imo

so switch up the melody a bit and you think it could work? it it just boring, annoying, or something? at least give me an adjective lol

drifting forum Jan 30, 2024, 6:40 PM

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its dry and boring and sounds bad, just rework it

clear blaze Jan 30, 2024, 6:42 PM

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drifting forum its dry and boring and sounds bad, just rework it

huh, okay. I like it. it's choir-ish and big

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thanks for the feedback mate

clear blaze Jan 31, 2024, 8:12 PM

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I feel like the melody isn't that bad. does anyone have any other opinions?

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 3:35 PM

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@thin sierra

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 3:35 PM

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let me have a listen now

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how are you with eqing/ sidechaining

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 3:37 PM

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I know how I just dont do it appropriately sometimes

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 3:37 PM

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cus yur 808 is clashing with something ( i think its the synth thing youre using especally at 1.23 whtas playing at the same time as the 808 sub youre using ?

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if that makes sense haha

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you ever tried making dnb ?

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 3:38 PM

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maybe the synth

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 3:39 PM

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idk if that needs much sub at all i dont thin

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 3:39 PM

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thin sierra you ever tried making dnb ?

im not sure, I just make whatever I think sounds good

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 3:40 PM

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with your eq take the sub out from left side and keep sliding it right untill the sub is gone

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or it sounds weird

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sub usually stops around 200 hz bit befire that

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 3:41 PM

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take the sub out of the 808?

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 3:41 PM

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you should try make some its quite fun

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nooo the synth

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defo not 808

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 3:42 PM

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ah I gotchu

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 3:42 PM

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at the time stamp i mentioned earlier what plays at the same time as 808

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1.23

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?

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 3:43 PM

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are you talking about the distorted reverse 808?

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or right after that

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because after that it's the same as the melody has always had

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man it's so weird I don't hear anything clashing. I've mixed too long

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 4:07 PM

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maybe im bugging

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mabe someone else should give oppinion.on what i just said before you start fucking with it

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 5:15 PM

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thin sierra mabe someone else should give oppinion.on what i just said before you start fuck...

what do you think about the melody?

thin sierra Feb 1, 2024, 5:17 PM

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its not clear enough you might need to turn it down or something add less effects to it

clear blaze Feb 1, 2024, 5:33 PM

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yeah it definitely needs turned down

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