please help me fix chord prog

[inland relic]

sent a chord prog to friend, friend said it was wrong, sent them simplified chord prog, said it was wrong on a fundamental level, pls help me fix

[lime pasture]

i wouldnt say its wrong depending on what youre going for but if you want it to be "fundamentally" correct the 4th chord should be the 1 chord meaning it should resolve, the chord progression leaves a feeling of incompleteness if ykwim but it sounds good if thats what you want it to sound like man

[inland relic]

alright

[lime pasture]

i dont have perfect pitch so i cant tell you exactly which notes to lower or raise but you should be able to hum out the pitches and correct it as needed

[lime pasture]

sounds nice once again but personally id recommend readding the second chord from the first one but again it all comes down to personal peference cause it is your progression youre gonna go far !

[inland relic]

alr

tysm for ur help