#My first beat! Need feedback

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winter stirrup
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post the mp3! links aren't allowed

glacial nacelle
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Hold up

glacial nacelle
glacial nacelle
winter stirrup
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Pretty nice little beat man. I've only been producing for 3 or so months but here's some things I noticed
1.) the beginning sounds a bit all over the place. I get it's an intro but some of the notes feel a bit random, especially that lower note. it's a bit jarring
2.) its a bit repetitive, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IH-zpS7gxxg&t=39s is a great video to learn how to comp better
3.) The piano lead sounds a bit too soft compared to the rain. I'd either turn down the rain or turn up the piano.

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some more things, work on variation in the drums. I'd say for ur first beat, you definitely have the basics down. Its a great first beat. My first "beat" sounded like this to compare lol. keep working man

glacial nacelle
winter stirrup
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a small midi keyboard changed the game for me tbh

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but its not nessesary, you can use ur actual keyboard. the key is to make and improve

glacial nacelle
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I do really appreciate all the thought you put into this