#heya
near jackal
it sounds good to me, especially for someone's first beat. try experimenting with the BPM to change the groove of the song, and maybe use some plugins on the melody to change up the sound.
heady ocean
give it some foundation
add some bass, just one single bass note (a lower one)
maybe change the note every 4 bars
sick spoke
well obv its not finished yet, but finish it! and post it back here and i can point but more stuff out bc nothing is wrong so far except it feels a little off beat at around 10 seconds
atomic lodge
well obv its not finished yet, but finish it! and post it back here and i can po...
ill try!! 🥰 🤓 but nothing i add to it sounds good, which is my problem.
onyx halo
Add bass, extra layers of instruments, arps, and drums, whatever you can, essentially just try to finish the song with what you can then post here so we can give a more comprehensive feedback