what's this missing?

[minor flame]

also im still trying to train my ear on muddyness. I tend to put way to much in but I kinda like the craziness. any constructive feedback welcome!

[minor flame]

some updates, louden'd the drums, changes the hh pitch and added some more sliiiddddeee

[novel geyser]

I think the sound selection could be improved. The main melody sounds a bit annoying for a lead, Id recomend downloading Vital maybe, its basically serum, BUT FREE!

[proven island]

to me it doesnt sound like its missing anything instrumental really if this beat was intended to have vocals on it the space for vocals is always necessary.

[minor flame]

all sounds are made in vital!

[novel geyser]

cool! id look up some tutorials for sound design maybe, theres some rlly helpful videos on yt

[minor flame]

i’m mostly just making music for myself so im kinda just making whatever. i’ve been told i leave no room tho but it’s not a big deal rn to me tbh, i appreciate the feedback!

[minor flame]

yeah i know i mostly just play around with knobs until it sounds halfway decent. i’ll watch so vids, appreciate the feedback man!