what to add or change?

[inland marten]

is the mixing good?

Its supposed to be a kinda dark/creepy beat

if you dont wanna hear the intro just skip to 0:27

[dusty mist]

You could add some b-parts or more changes in that beat. It gets repetitive too quick. Even some beatbreaks or just a change of octaves, sounds, chords do wonder sometimes.

[inland marten]

wahts b-parts

[dusty mist]

I'm referring to song structures. You can look on Wikipedia. I also have a tutorial for basic beat structuring

https://youtu.be/Rdcbz0yP2Y4?si=r8NmT4XhSh3GbLyU

[inland marten]

yh I kinda need to

learn on structuring

my beats

my intros are good but

[dusty mist]

Very important if you want to sell beats to artists. They don't want raw products.

[inland marten]

but

in the first part when you build the song up

you dont necesarry need extra sounds or b-parts right

[dusty mist]

How you build it is up to you

Build up is fine

[inland marten]

okk I changed some stuff

[inland marten]

maybe this wont be final yet but is this

a good example

i did most of the sounds after the hook