Just made this beat, I would love some feedback

[pine sentinel]

@north cedar Yo man I would love some feedback and help on this, particularly the chorus. I havent mixed it yet

[umbral urchin]

Everything is so smooth w but I think it needs a bit more bass; maybe add a sub bass sidechained to your bass guitar idk. Also, I love the idea but I think you need to work a bit more on that first piano counter melody

[pine sentinel]

thanks for reply

[pine sentinel]

do you think the trumpets on chorus sound fine?

[tight plank]

Agree with @umbral urchin It needs a sub-bass to bring a fullness to it. The trumpets sound fine, but I didn't know that was the chorus. Might need to punch it up to make it known that this is the chorus! Add some layers, and maybe change the chord structure to give it a profound difference from your verse.

[umbral urchin]

A bit more but doesn't need that much more for the chorus tbh

[tight plank]

Tomato, toh-mah-toh. My opinion is just that. There's no real right or wrong way 🙂

[north cedar]

sorry for being so late

if you want to makje the chorus feel like

more impactful

add some stereo to the t rumpets

if you dont know how to do that easy ways are
stereo shaper (my favorite, it has a fwe presets for making a sound stereo)
chorus/flanger
delay

cause for now the chorus

doesnt seem to hit how it should

mixing wise the bass is just

too quiet

ppl saying you need sub

you dont there just too little bass

i rlly like it tho ur on the right track and its solid

[night kraken]

Agree with the piece lacking sub bass

Maybe the piano can be brought out a little more effectively