what do yall think of this little demo i made (im rapping)

[deft osprey]

its alright but theres quite a lot of rverb

[edgy gorge]

ok rap wise writing wise i like it, you got good flow and good style

mixing wise theres

wayy to much reverb

either find a way to mix that right or just dont use reverb

try delay maybe

and

the vocals overlap the instrumental too much

the levels dont match right

volume wise

but aside from that ur good on beat and everything