This my first edm song please give a feed back

[ripe shore]

solid

would give 5/10 snare sounds bit cheap

lead is cool tough

[buoyant dagger]

can you give me some advice to make the snare sounds better

[ripe shore]

uhh tbh ure asking the wrong person i just do trap

[buoyant dagger]

so what do you mean by cheap

[ripe shore]

i sound kinda high

i would try something like that

but im not sure

[buoyant dagger]

oh i got it

[ripe shore]

try to change the pitch and be experimental

[stiff wing]

it doesn't sound very "punchy" I guess is what he means. it does carry a more high end than mids

[ripe shore]

prob ye

[stiff wing]

I think you can keep it but you could try layering it with a more punchy snare

[ripe shore]

ye i think hes the guy too talk to

[buoyant dagger]

yeah i understand it
ill try to fix it now

[ripe shore]

what do u think about my beat?

[buoyant dagger]

where is it

[ripe shore]

18mins

7th beat from top

[stiff wing]

in the feedback channel

[buoyant dagger]

can u give me your thoughts about my song

[buoyant dagger]

ill check it now

[stiff wing]

i like it

for me, I think the snare is the biggest issue

[buoyant dagger]

i cutted a lot low frequencies for snares

@ripe shore @stiff wing is it good now?

[stiff wing]

show it with the whole song

[buoyant dagger]

ok wait

[ripe shore]

can u show whole new beat

[buoyant dagger]

also added another snare @ripe shore @stiff wing

[ripe shore]

ye thats better ig