Need Feedback only been producing for 2 months

[brisk yarrow]

i think the 808 is too loud and it's a little repetitive and doesn't respect the flow bar
(the flow bar is basicaly a line that needs to be on same level, that means that if it goes under, it gets boring, if it goes on top of the line, it's annoying) i think that it's both of the cases, at the beegining it's pretty banger, but in the middle part it's a little boring and at the end it's the same thing over and over so it gets frustrating and annoying
otherwise that's awsome
it's even better than my production even if i guessed you are using loops of instruments (tell me if i'm wrong)
i started like almost 1 year ago and it's really awsome, just try to make more melodys that doesn't gets on the same section cuz a human can only really focus on 3 instruments

[celest spindle]

I do not use loops i make all my melodies from scratch

[brisk yarrow]

ok ok

wel lthat pretty nice

[celest spindle]

I changed up the melody at the end of it so it does not get as repetitive with the melody