#v1 or v2?
opal valley
marsh zenith
Like the first version more. Tho I think you need to write a new version with new lyrics. Not trying to be negative but u have a nice flow and a nice voice but it needs other lyrics. Try to make it rhyme a bit more to make the lines connect and try to write about something less generic, (singing about dealing and smoking and drinking is not so interesting as every gangster rapper sings about it and u mention it in every line). I feel like u could write lyrics that connect to u more and that are deeper, would sound way better. Lmk if u have any question about what I mean and be sure to send me the mp3 if u make a new version. Keep up the good work bro.
opal valley
Like the first version more. Tho I think you need to write a new version with ne...
I think I need to find my style
opal valley
@marsh zenith thoughts?