#How can I improve this?

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primal plover
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straight sines are a bit simple of a texture but this would be fire with a beat

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it's hummable and there's room for the artist to fill the pockets

fickle panther
primal plover
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i really liked it so I cooked it up a little, mind if I share it with you here?

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also did you know you have a G, a G#, and an A in there? That's usually not a good idea lol

I think it's supposed to be in A minor, so the G# would be wrong.

fickle panther
primal plover
fickle panther
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thank you

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i see ur idea of it

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🙏

fickle panther
primal plover
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low pass filter into a delay

fickle panther
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👍

primal plover
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oh and also a reversed kick into the first kick