this is so tight how can i make it better

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@safe ferry vocal pakcs or originals

seems original vocals

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They my vocals

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Yes

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at around 250

[safe ferry]

I just wrote and sung it the beat is from someone else

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you have a break with the drums

i would suggest you do the same for the intro

instead of directly having drums and the melody

just the melody then the drums

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oh

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damn good singing fr

[safe ferry]

Oh aite i can try that

[safe ferry]

Fr ?

Hows the song as a whole

Do u like it

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rly good

add some more bass elements

maybe put an eq on the kicks and kinda emphasise the lows

just for that energy rise and drop

[dusk elk]

That was the most emotional "Fuck you" I ever heard
I'd say I like it but more groove in the bass would be nice

or it's just me I like bass lol

[bright stump]

i don't like it :/

[dusk elk]

But why

[frank needle]

bass is what makes a track bouncy