#Thoughts/improvements/feedback?

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restive plover
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calm spade
restive plover
calm spade
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Here to return the feedback.

Bit of clashing with the pianos at the start.
The main part of the song sounds more like an extended build up rather than a drop or whatever.
I can't tell if it's a bass or someone mumbling?
Kick needs to cut through much more.
Honestly, It's a little busy, and that vocal sample doesn't help.

Now with the crit out of the way, I would suggest...

  • Cut out some higher freq's on the piano and bring some mids back.
  • Your... D# I think? A different chord would work here, it is really jarring.
  • Less is more. Take out some instruments.
  • You've slammed everything to be as loud as possible with very little dynamic range. Idk if you've just applied a compressor or ozone or something over your master, but take it off.
  • Rethink some of your samples. Your kick doesn't work, at least not how it's mixed.
  • Get rid of whatever that humming/mumbling sound is.

Now for the positives. You've got a good foundation for the start of a track. This could work as a build up, with changes, and then write a new drop, less complicated, more space, more dynamic range.

willow phoenix
# restive plover

It sounds pretty good, at around 40s seconds it feels weird (I don't know how to describe it) and I would extend the rain noises in the beginning by a second maybe or have it fade out.

restive plover
restive plover
raw stratus
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why do you mfs always compress your songs to the point it sounds like an android phone speaker in the name of making it 'loud'

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my cat is dead and its your fault

restive plover
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meow?

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idk

restive plover
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on the master

raw stratus
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You're crazy

restive plover
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i followed a youtube comment

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mah bad

scarlet ice
restive plover
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restive plover
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@calm spade @scarlet ice

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this better?

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i removed a buncha shit

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changed the kick