Hello I just made this in like 15 minutes, idk how to mix or master but like is this shit what can I do to improve I haven't manually adjusted vocals in autotune graph any criticism is appreciated as I want to improve I just want opinions
#General Advice
spiral pier
limber scaffold
Im a novice at the craft so take my opinions and observations with that in mind.
1.) The song cuts off halfway through the recording. Not sure if that's an issue with the upload or something on my end but I'm sure that's fixable.
2.) The parts feel like they are all there. I think the bass line is easy to groove to, but I think it might need a little more in the low range in the mixing to get my speakers to thump a little. Not too much though because I like the lightness of the vibe. Also when the bass line kicks in, I think it overpowers the strings just a little bit so maybe turn those up a bit?
3.) In my opinion, the vocals need just a bit of reverb. I saw a clip somewhere of someone adding reverb to vocals just in certain spots and it really improved the sound I think. Ill try to find that clip and post it if I can get it again. Essentially he used some automations to add reverb in the right spots.
Keep up the strong work!
sour rivet
Hello I just made this in like 15 minutes, idk how to mix or master but like is ...
That clipping sound mixed with claps is ruining the song
Also add some reverb in claps
spiral pier
Appreciate the feedback, as far as the beat I'm unable to change anything to do with it because I just downloaded it from YouTube but I'll definitely try improve on vocals and add some reverb