#The side you saw.

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heavy yoke
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I only ever saw myself,
in the painted pieces.

The pieces jagged and dripped with blood,
of the broken mirror,
on the other side of my reflection.

The lost puzzle piece only I knew.
The sins evoked but hidden,
The side only my eyes had beheld.

No other had known it.
No other had tried to fix it,
No other foolish enough to,

but you.

Oddly enough,
you were charming.

A charm that held true to its words,
An honest speaker.

You convinced me I could change,
That the past can be forgotten,
That maybe you could be the one to do it,

for me?

I feel foolish to even consider,
But your words hypnotize,
into this slumbering dream,
where I am still wide awake.

I do not know what this is.

My heart beats calmer the more you speak,
The more I listen,
The more we laugh.

oh.
That's what it is,
The heart.

Love.

You made it through these ribs,
You turned the pieces into something new,
You held my heart in your palm,
Not possessively,

but gentle,
tender.

I thought I would always see this side no one sees,
I thought no one would share that view,
I thought whoever did, would fear it,

loathe it,
avoid it.

I was proven wrong.

You didn't fix my mirror,
You improved it.

now, I share a better view,
I can see a clearer reflection,
And the best part,

You're a part of it too.

frail ibex
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Love the way you mirror certain motifs (pun intended)

heavy yoke
drifting dew
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''I thought I would............... would fear it,''… How can someone portray such a profoundly human experience so eloquently? I could really relate to these lines; the writing style is so moving. That is a very lovely way of putting it.🙂

drifting dew
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Oh, I see. The lines are so good, I really feel like talking to the poem.

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I also posted a poem here but that's not good enough—just some depressed stuff. So that's why this line touched me really deeply.

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Keep going you are excellent. Have a great time.

heavy yoke
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I dont actually know what being in a relationship iswhat_is_going_on

drifting dew
velvet creek
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I absolutely loved this, I literally cried while reading this

cyan daggerBOT
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*I absolutely

loved this, I literally

cried while reading this*

velvet creek
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god, am I a sucker for poems like this

lunar silo
heavy yoke
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would appreciate it if yall left a star, if not, thats fine too, aslong as yall enjoy itNoizeLoves

wary parrot
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I loved this OH MY GOD!

heavy yoke