[PB] Chiti chamdi, kale vesh | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

delicate sedge May 14, 2026, 10:55 AM

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Punjabi

golden comet May 14, 2026, 10:56 AM

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Yes

golden comet May 14, 2026, 10:56 AM

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Did you understand the original version?

delicate sedge May 14, 2026, 10:57 AM

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Yeup

golden comet May 14, 2026, 10:58 AM

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What's your honest feedback if I may ask?

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It was written as lighthearted satire nothing serious

delicate sedge May 14, 2026, 11:00 AM

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I am not a fan of short poems. But as in overall, the poem is really eye catching
In the original punjabi version, the rhymes are nice

golden comet May 14, 2026, 11:01 AM

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I got longer one as well

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A complete tutogram

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It starts with like: "Karigari ki kitaba katthi kitiya...."

#[PB] Chiti chamdi, kale vesh