#[PB] Chiti chamdi, kale vesh
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Yes
Did you understand the original version?
Yeup
What's your honest feedback if I may ask?
It was written as lighthearted satire nothing serious
I am not a fan of short poems. But as in overall, the poem is really eye catching
In the original punjabi version, the rhymes are nice
I got longer one as well
A complete tutogram
It starts with like: "Karigari ki kitaba katthi kitiya...."