distant sonnet
alr so boom I think I got a great start going so far but I’ve lowkey been stuck tryna find a meaningful word to show some sort of connection to the previous statement. I’m trying to make a connection between her gentleness and the patience behind it but I couldn’t find a great way to state that. Any suggestions or feedback would be greatly appreciated 🙏🏽
glossy ivy
Nor in a rush to show off
Slowly, slowly. The Lilly grows, like a diamond it needs to be discovered
(It sucks ik)
humble mist
So you need a word for gentleness/patience?
Forbearance, Compassionateness, warm-heartedness, good-natured, mellowness, considerateness, timidity
distant sonnet
Thank yall so much this not only helped me finish the sentence but what i think is a good complete poem🙏🏽
humble mist
Yay! Share?
idle hearth
I see you already finished your poem. I just thought of:
...her petals so stately,
Rising so gently; flowers filling my view.
